"WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! Keep on writing fics like this! (Previously on The Loud House. She hoped the kids would say something, but all they got were grunts of disbelief. ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. How about i give you something new to explain! He managed to, but with a twist. That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. Post a journal. 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). (Lynn looks confused.) They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! "Sigh. The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. Also, just to note, not all of my stories are going to be this gritty or serious or emotional. (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). Don't fight now! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! The parents shook their heads up and down rapidly and nervously, the thought of being arrested terrified them and they couldn't stand the thought of being separated from their kids. Did anything life threatening happen? Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. Lincoln: Girls! Lucy walked towards him and they wrapped their arms around each other's shoulders. Lynn has a bruised cheek and the rest are all still coated in muck and wet from the sea. Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. "I'm not sure," Felix responded with, "I've got two groups of people saying they have one of our hotel rooms at the same time. News flash; I live here!". So expect a bill in the mail." We didn't just barge into the room. Lola: WE'RE HORRIBLE BRATS!!! There's a massive storm heading your way." Rita: Lincoln?! (sniffles) I'd better make a home fast. A very, and I'm talking VERY, controversial episode of The Loud House. Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. You're scaring even me. Clenching his fist, he raises it up and smashes it hard on the ground. More information No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane More like this House Cartoon Cartoon Fan Cartoon Shows Lucy: Lincoln, stop! Lincoln: Well my family doesnt think im bad luck anymore, in fact now they think im good luck. And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. (Both glare at each other) First you threaten me with your lousy pop stick of a baseball bat to make me come to a disgusting game thats nothing but a waste of time, than you blame me for your loss, than you help ruin my life, than youre too stupid to listen to my confession and admit that you were wrong and than at another stupid game you dont even make it up to me and you make me into some silly object! Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. "They're not the only guilty ones," Lynn, the girl in red with brown hair tied in a ponytail, responded back with, in a bit of wise-cracking tone, "Yesterday, Lana and I broke the elevators. *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! We get it. Those words just made Lynn Sr. and Rita feel even more lousy and know for certain that they messed up big time. He turned to specifically glare at the parents and added, "And just so you know, you're banned for life now. I have failed as a human being. I hate presentations! ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. Everyone heads to Vanzilla, but Lincoln still stays in place). (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. I messed up and maybe i did want to support some of you guys! The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. But this particular day, one of those children has been left out due to some "bad luck". Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. What seems to be the problem?" Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. Lynn Sr. bit his lip for a moment, rubbed the back of his head with hand, and then sighed, "It might take a while and it might not be easy, but I'm certain we can regain their trust." "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" Lynn: *Gasp* NOOOOOO!!!!! Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! WE WENT TOO FAR!!! She whistles for Fangs. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! "I can't believe you kids just did that," Rita said, tears running down her face like a river. Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). Anything bad happen then? ", Lori: "Oh Lincoln, if you don't feel like attending our events all the time, we're not forcing you to go. Lincoln: Stop it! Luna spots Lincoln). Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. No Such Luck/Frog Wild Episode aired Mar 14, 2017 TV-Y7 22 m IMDb RATING 5.1 /10 218 YOUR RATING Rate Animation Adventure Comedy Lincoln is rejected by his sisters because he is "bad luck"; Lincoln and Lana protect the frogs from being dissected. He briefly looks at the family photo, beginning to cry. "What we're saying is is that you two are going to be confided to this building for the next 2 calendar cycles, only to leave for employment reasons or to get us sustenance from the one of our beloved stores." (It cuts to the beach, Lincoln is in sunglasses and a hat.). Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! Luan brought it. Later, in jail). (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. After that, for the remainder of the car ride, nothing was heard but the sounds of Rita's crying and her tears dropping from her face. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? The furniture was all over the place, the shower was ruined, the air conditioner was gone and he noticed a 17-year old girl with blonde hair in a blue shirt outside, about to jump from the side of the balcony. On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). Rita stood up and heads to the door. YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. You never let me have a say in the matter! We don't need to get violent here. ", Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! "Yes, you are right," the woman said, "It appears that your parents were caught swimming in the pool after hours." "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" Lincoln: So where did this looney belief that i was bad luck suddenly come from, huh!? I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. "Aha!," she said, in triumph over what she found, "It appears that you were kicked out and supposed to leave the hotel at 9 am sharp." When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. [Everyone headed to the living room to sleep together. How can I help you?" They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. ", Luna: (opens her arms out) "Come here, bro." ", Lola: (slightly sad) "Well, I probably would've before, but, from now on, you come to my pageants when you want to, and if not, it's fine by me. "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" All of you!" (Bursts into tears). I'm not bad luck. Dont threaten your little sister! I feel like a fool! Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? She hugged him back.] "EXCUSE ME???!!!" (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. We said we were sorry. Luna: I dont know. You just mess up everything! ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! I ADMIT IT!!! He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. Lincoln: I admit, it was stupid of me to drag that lie on, but while i learn an important lesson not to be a fibber more than i needed, what do you numbnuts learn!? She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. That..That's not true. Lori: Is that literally what you think we are.? Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. ", Lincoln: "No. "Which room number is it?" Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). That question caused all the sisters to become shocked and then become angry. "Good riddance." Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". I tried to make it as comical as i could. Lynn Sr. and Rita were not happy to hear that, but knew that arguing with their kids would be pointless. (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. Taking the device out of the girl's hand. Lincoln returns the hug, rubbing her back), Lynn: "No, it'sNOT okay! "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Whats next? Project Loud House; Ties That Bind; It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House; Toads and Tiaras; . Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! I HATE THIS!!! Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. No such luck alt ending5. And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. Things were destroyed or damaged and they saw some people getting tended to for bruises. Lincoln: Alright, i admit! No self-insert oc this time. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Its a stupid mascot costume! What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. Post an update . Lincoln: Lucy! Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." The End. ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" Lucy: Helping a brother who helped me. Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. Lincoln: Alright then, call them. No more Loud Family? Lincoln: Happy Valentines Day, Ronnie Anne. Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. You tricked us in the first place. Lincoln: "Oh really." Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. I spread one little white lie just to get more free time because i cant afford to come to so many actvities all in one go! I do not own The Loud House, it belongs to Nickelodeon Animation, created by Chris Savino. Rita: Honey, please. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. . Lincoln: AND I NEVER, EVER WANT TO SEE YOU UNLUCKY PARASITES IN MY LIFE AGAIN!!! ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. Thats not how it works! Get me arrested. ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). Just a head's up. They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. The Louds. Lori said. Hahahaha! "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. I'm calling the cops! Ruthless People extended ending13. Ugh!" Trivia. I'll keep it between the both of us. #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . Rita: WE ARE THE MOST DISGRACEFUL PEOPLE EVER!!! Lucy: So, that's it then? Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. "Kids," Lynn Sr. got up from his seat, not realizing how angry the kids were, "What are you doing here? No pun intended. They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game! She then turned around, along with the other siblings, and glared at their parents. You took it too far! No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. Lincoln: (tearful) No! Lincoln: I hate this! I'm sorry I was such a bad loser, all I wanted was for Lincoln to support me, to support us. Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" "Mr. Security Officer, if I may," his attention went down to that of a four-year old girl with shaggy brown hair, glasses and a green sweatshirt, she pointed to the three other men in the room, and said, "I'd like to point out that these three imbeciles welcomed themselves into our room for no good reason. "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" Anyway, enjoy. She shouted that last part at the top of her lungs. Anyway, here's my fanfiction. Sweaty Pants here! They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. "Room 5," Felix answered with, "On the 11th floor." Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! One Squirrel tosses the bat right at Lincoln by accident. Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? (yet another author interruption: I know this sounds harsh, but in all fairness, that is a pretty stupid thing to do and the reason behind it doesn't help). "Well mom, you know what I think?" ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment. (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! Lynn: FINE! Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." Lynn Loud Sr. and Rita Loud were in the spa, trying to get their minds off the trouble their kids caused yesterday. Lincoln blushed and hugged Ronnie Anne. I'll definitely come to your next game, Lynn. Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? NOBODY!!! Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! Lincoln: No! Lucy: Come on Fangs, we've got some repaying to do for Lincoln. But worse than that, I was being a horrible sister!" Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. "Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. The important thing is that we learn from them. (They smile, Rita comes over to hug him and rest of them except Lynnjoin in for a group hug. Even more computer typing was heard but soon afterward the woman on the other going, "Hhhmmmm.," was also heard. Lisa responded with in her genius talk. I hate softball! "Wait, what are you saying?" Lynn: HUH!?!?! But dont worry, youre still a great writer. We got your back. (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). We need it! 2022 - 2023 Add to Favourites Comment ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! A rather large family that sticks together through thick and thin. Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. I was horrible to you! Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. Lana: (tearful) He might tell everyone in town and everyone will hate us. "YOU HEARD HER!" I would feel awful if you did. No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. It's no fun without Lincoln! Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. (The family screams in horror. Lucy: But..but you wanted us to believe it. (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. Lucy: "He's actually doing pretty good." Lynn: [nerviously] "Yeah, decent enough. It's too broken, even for me! If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. ", Lincoln: "But just because you lost your game, doesn't mean you have to pin it on me! Lisa: Easy, easy! Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. Lana: Gee. Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore? "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. Speaking of, I plan to do another alternate ending to another Loud House episode, the ending for it might have been wholesome and good, I just feel that the events that happen in the episode could've been prevented if the siblings did this, that's all I'm going to say. When Vanzilla pulled into the Loud Family driveway, Lori turned to her parents and said, "We're going to take our luggage up to our rooms. Okay look, answer me these questions! "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" *, Lincoln: It's not fair. I pull off one little trick and you guys all flip out over some nonsense like a bunch of gullible buffoons! Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ruth meant what she said when she said she would get a restraining order, which she did, and to make extra sure the family couldn't go to her, she packed up everything and moved to somewhere in Alaska. Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. The woman groaned and responded with, "It's not so much the dip that got them in trouble, rather it was their lack of swimwear that did." "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. (They keep searching the house. "Lori!," Lynn Sr. yelled, "You should better then to stop suddenly in traffic!" Fortunately, there was no earthquake. [takes the mask off]"I was here the whole time! (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! What do you think, Pep? "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". I can't even begin to imagine what they'll do their parents when they find them.'. Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". Would you mind me speaking to Angus for a bit? Lucy said, as the siblings once again glared at their parents with anger. Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! I just hurt Lynn! Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! I dont want to support you psychos! Post-Story Notice: Anyway. Lucy: Lincoln's right! Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. Lincoln then brought his arms back, suggesting a family hug. Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen.